First Chapter Critique

Your first chapter is the bait on the hook, the first drop of blood that stains the water. It needs to be an irresistible promise of the darkness yet to come that the reader simply cannot refuse. A first chapter critique is a detailed analysis of your opening chapter—focusing on atmosphere, psychological impact, voice, and pacing to ensure a powerful introduction and an instantly gripping read. Send me your manuscript's beginning, and I will ensure it has the power to drag the reader, willingly, into the dark. 

With the first chapter critique service, you will receive:

• Two full read-throughs of your first 5,000 words

• In-line comments  - Detailed suggestions and questions embedded directly within your manuscript via track changes. 

• Editorial letter - A comprehensive report (2-5 pages) summarizing the chapter's strengths and weaknesses with actionable advice for revisions.

• Email support -   One hour of follow-up email support to discuss the feedback and develop a plan of action. 

All edits are made using The Chicago Manual of Style and Track Changes unless otherwise requested.